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Queen of Hearts

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Created for Level 2 of the Playing Card Challenge at :iconmanipulatethis:

I REVISED MY CHALLENGE PIECE AND MADE THE APPROPRIATE CHANGES TO THE RESOURCES:


RESCOURCES:
Basic card template: [link]
Model: [link]
Two Required Textures:
[link]
[link]
Chinese brush painting:
[link]
Frames brushes: [link]
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TheFantaSim
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I noticed something that I didn't notice before, so I'm writing you a critique.

On a real playing card, the two halves look exactly a like, but yours does not. If i was to flip the bottom to the top, I would see a "yellow flap of fabric" that is not on the other side. In addition, the two decorations on the right hand side are not the same so they do not meet in the middle. So you're not creating a "typical" playing card as the instructions for the challenge says.

You have plenty of time to either edit this one or start a new one, and I hope you do. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>